dissertation editing

Basically the dissertation you created was perfect,
When the teacher comes to marking it he call me into a meeting and say he doesnt believe the work was written by me because the writing is very good, basically meaning the standard of the writing is extremely above my standard and some parts of the paper was so in detail that the students in the uni are not even able to do it.
So the teacher has given me a chance to re-do the paper, basically wanting me to adjust and edit it.
This is my last piece of work and my last chance, doing this will wrong will result in failure. Its vital that everything asked is been done and done properly.
I need the dissertation to be edited to adjust to make it sound simpler, so please go through the entire dissertation changing any big vocabulary and making it sound simpler. Also go through the complex paragraphs and make them simpler.
Change some paragraphs, in term of re-writing and make them easier to read and sound.
Also the teacher has required me to justify my research method in detail.

Below I will bullet point the page numbers and the points that need to be adjusted/edited/changed.
1. Page 7(figure 1) use a simpler graph if possible and explain the graph in detail
2. Page 8(figure 2) use a simpler graph if possible and explain the graph in detail
3. Page 13 explain the research design in detail
4. Page 15 was the sampling method the only method used if you can use another please change it and explain the method in detail. If not then please explain sampling method in detail as the teacher believed I did not understand the sampling method, so please explain that type of method.
5. Page 15 is there another process instead of the 5-likert questionnaire type for data collection and research process that can be used if so please change as the teacher also believe I did not know this system. If you cant change please explain the 5-likert in detail.
6. Page 16 data analysis, explain the spss software in detail.
7. Page 16 coefficient alpha explained in detail if possible use a simpler method.
8. Page 17 (figure 3) the teacher asked me about this graph and I had no clue what it was so please use a simpler graph and explain what the graph means.
9. Page 18 (analysis index and spss software) if possible use another method and explain if not please this index in detail.
10. Page 19 ( table 1 and table 2) teacher asked me about these graphs I had no clue what they was, please use simpler graphs and explain them in detail if not explain the graphs in detail.
11. Page 21 ( table 3) teacher asked me about these graphs I had no clue what they was, please use simpler graphs and explain them in detail if not explain the graphs in detail.
12. Page 22 ( table 4 ) teacher asked me about these graphs I had no clue what they was, please use simpler graphs and explain them in detail if not explain the graphs in detail.
13. Page 23 ( table 5 ) teacher asked me about these graphs I had no clue what they was, please use simpler graphs and explain them in detail if not explain the graphs in detail.
14. Page 25 ( table 6 ) teacher asked me about these graphs I had no clue what they was, please use simpler graphs and explain them in detail if not explain the graphs in detail.

All the above are major points that have to be adjusted as the request of the teacher. Please ensure the entire dissertation is read through and made simpler complete, dont make the worth less but just make it simpler. Please ensure you change and big vocabs and sentence to normal vocab and the graph need to be simplified anything that is very complex to a high level standard need to be simplified. Please ensure some of the paragraphs are re-written as the dissertation has to be a little different. The main thing is to explain in detail to prove to the teacher that I have an understanding. Please ensure that my research method is justified in detail as the teacher has required this.

Please keep in touch with me about anything you need or want to ask.
Also please highlight all the changes are highlighted in red so I know what has been changed.
Please ensure all contents pages, references link up as normal.

Thank you very much for all your help.
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