Write a paper about the Israeli Defense Force: Departure from a “Peoples Army”

I have already written the essay but I need to edit it to better suit the instructions for the paper. It is a paper that is supposed to be based on Violence and I’d like someone to help me make my paper a little more pertinent to that subject. I will send the essay that is already written, which includes some sources, and I’ll include the prompt for the assignment and the alterations that need to be made.