Write a Great Gatsby research paper

My paper need to be rewritten because my professor said that I wasn\’t making enough flow in the essay. A complete write is the best option because I need supportive argument in the content that can explain my thesis statement. Requirements are to make an essay of 8-10 pages that makes an argument (you need a thesis that makes a claim and that is at the end of the intro) about (at least) one work of literature; cite at least 8 sources; develop one idea (one argument) per paragraph; compose a conclusion that brings the essay to a logical conclusion; and lastly include a work cited page. To view my citations use a copy and paste them into google scholars.  Need one sentence that makes a claim about the novel and acts as the controlling idea for the essay. Good transitional sentences between paragraph.when using quotes, where it came from and the page number have to be put at the end of the quote, for example (Fitzgerald 12). Don\’t make paragraph ending with quotes, try blending in sentences after the quote so that it doesn\’t look like the quote was just dropped in. Explain the plot in the intro but in a relatively quickly way. (My professor like how I explain the novel and discuss class in the first two paragraph). Has to be MLA Style and at the last page listing all the work cited pages used.  My Thesis was:  * If you think the thesis needs more detail, you are welcome to add.* I attach the old research essay and a research essay example giving by the professor.