Explain why students are financially strapped and time sucked?

. The topic sentence must be a full, grammatically sentence that flows from the AGD. As it is currently written, it does not. – You have some phrases in main point one the need to be full sentences. Also the warrant of your B point does not support your claim. It is validating online education therefore it does not belong in the problem section. That warrant needs to be changed. Your cause section is not causing the problems. Your current speech has the cause as online education and how beneficial it is. That belongs in the solutions. The cause should be the reason why students are financially strapped and time sucked. In the 3rd main point you have no policy change and you must have a change of regulation. Like a certain number of online courses per subject in each college. You also need an individual solution like speaking at a college school board committee about this subject. Nice conclusion. The real issue in your speech is main point 2 and 3. These are major issues