Do Students Lose More than They Gain in Online Writing Classes?

I want somebody to write a critique essay after reading attached article. Furthermore you have to include 3 additional references.

Here is the grading areas:
Checklist
Value

The critique is based on a scholarly source

Wrote a thesis that gave the assessment a clear focus

Composed a thesis-based outline in which each component was a sentence

Evaluated the author’s conclusion, the argument that led to the conclusion, and the quality of the author’s evidence
Wrote an effective introductory paragraph
Wrote an effective concluding paragraph

Revised the rough draft with instructor’s comments (if applicable).