Describe how stock exchange works.

The best section of your description is the section titled “How Stock Exchange Works” and you might want to make it the focus of your description. The other parts have descriptive elements, but often feel like words taken from various sources and lumped together to partially describe complex topics. With little guiding thread or forecasting happening the reader won’t know the purpose or intention of the document. It switches from being too dry and overly complex to not entirely describing the situation. However, the “How Stock Exchange Works” section is effective and describes a single process, stays focused, and uses more simplified language. Establish an introduction that does this and forecast what the document will do. Then use more creative and descriptive elements in your writing so that the reader can follow along and understand the topic better. Use some analogies and more Wikipedia-esque language. The design is more of an essay with some elements like headings and graphics. Try to approach this more like an overall designed document by paying attention to what ways you could make the text, graphics, and other design elements work together to help the reader understand the material better.