Discuss diffrent money making ideas

I need someone to do a little writing for me for a gofund me campaign. GoFundMe gives a few tips on areas to write about. I have written a little in each area however I need you to rewrite the things that I wrote to make it sound better and flow better.  Also I Need you to add a little to each section. I know that you don\’t know much about me or what I offer so I need you to make up some things just to make the campaign sound good. Make sure you add something to each section in addition to the message I have that you rewrite. The last section I need you to completely write that section for me. Nothing big for a nice thank you!  Tips giving by GoFundMe:* Campaigns that raise the most money clearly explain:  – Who you are- Who (or what) you’re raising money for- How the money will be used- How soon you need the funds- Why this means so much to you- How thankful you will be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ – (Who you are)My name is Jerry Seigle and I am 31 years old and live in North Carolina.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  – (Who or what you’re raising money for)I am trying to raise money to start a new business. The name of my business is Tech Plastics.My company is basiced in Charlotte North Carolina. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  – (How the money will be used)I am raising money to purchase a plastic injection machine. This machine is used to produce the products that my company will be offering. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  – (How soon you need the funds)Janurary 16 2017 or as soon as posible. I would like to have the business fulling up and running by Febuary 1st._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  – (Why this means so much to you)I have always dreamed of having my own business making things that would be made in the USA. I have always had the heart to help others and with this company I will be able to employee people that are in need of work that may not meet requirements working elsewhere. I also see my else finance stable with this business and will be able to help others through donations. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  – (How thankful you will be)I need you to complete do this section for me (NOTE: include a statement that once my business is running strong I give back to the gofundme community to help someone else dream