Draft utilizes techniques of formal research writing for a majority of the essay. Content is concise and language is appropriate to audience and purpose, although minor errors in word choice and sentence construction are present.
You have a good start and you have made a compelling argument. Here is my feedback that I would like to see you incorporate for your week 5 five paper:~You have a good thesis statement. ~You have a well-formatted title page. ~You have some good research, but I would like to see more and more analysis. Use more sources. Keep developing the […]
